This week's story come to you from the lovely Lucy who blogs over at From Pen To Screen. If you haven't had a chance to visit her blog yet, here is a little about her.
My name is Lucy and I write the lifestyle/writing/beauty blog ‘From Pen To Screen’ (www.daisysmiler.blogspot.co.uk). I wrote this short story while I was on holiday in France a few years ago, but it has been rewritten quite a few times since then. I hope you enjoy it, be sure to let me know what you think!I hope you all enjoy her story!
Secrets of the Coral Reef by Lucy Connors
Standing on top of the
board, I am alone. Alone in paradise.
I raise my hands above
my head and lunge forward. The water rushes up to me and I am enveloped from
head to foot. I pull with my hands and open my eyes; I am in a whole new world.
I am amazed by the colour and radiance of the corals and seaweed that sway
before me; the orange, red and pink anemones stand rigid in the sea floor.
Slowly I look up and see a shoal of shimmering rainbow fish swim over my head
and I stare in wonder at all the different colours of their scales, glistening
in the sunlight. A million stars twinkling above me. Sea weed wraps
around my leg as I step off the reef. Trying to protect me. From what? I did
not yet know.
Down. Down. Down. Into
the blackness under me. I stare. Imagining all the evil wonders that lie
beneath me.
Out of the corner of
my eye I see the anemones shrink back into the sand, the rainbow fish scatter
in all directions and I instantly know something is wrong. I turn my head as
slowly as I can to minimise my movements. My body soon follows my head as
I stare in horror at what meets my eyes. Unable to draw my gaze away. A grey
fin slices through the water, a grey tail flicks from side to side. We meet
eyes for a fraction of a second and the shark swims towards me. Powerful
muscles designed just for this, power him through the water. My instincts tell
me to swim but I know the shark would have me in a second. Fight or flight.
Adrenaline courses through my body, through my blood. My heart pounds through
my chest sending (what I thought) were small vibrations through the water.
Towards the shark. The panic starts to take over. Forcing myself to breathe
through my mask I fight for control. I breathe long deep breaths. Long deep breaths
that are taking too long. Long deep breaths that are wasting time. Long deep
breaths that will either save, or cost, my life.
I try to think. I try
to remember. I know. I draw my hand back and propel myself forward, clumsily
pushing my body forward to give my arm more power. Amazingly my fingers meet
their target and I jab them into the shark’s eye. The force behind it sending a
wave of shock rippling through my body. A waterfall of emotion bubbles up
inside me. He gives me an evil grin, a warning and swims away, tail flicking
behind him.
My breath suddenly
escapes me and I realise I have been holding it. I kick up to the surface and
breathe slowly. Finally allowing myself to relax.
For now, I think,
Olivia Tophill is alive to live another day.
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Did you enjoy the story? Why not leave a comment telling Lucy what you thought!
Thanks for the kind words! :) I've really enjoyed the series this month. Thanks for letting me get involved :) x
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed doing the series :) Thank you for wanting to be involved, it's been great to have you be part of it x
DeleteLiving another day is always good! Great story.
ReplyDeleteIt sure is!
DeleteThank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteI was holding my breath by the end - lovely story thanks for linking up to #sundaystars
ReplyDeleteMe too, it was really suspenseful! Thanks for hosting :)
DeleteWow! That is such a great compliment! Thank you!
DeleteLucy xx